A Time For Us Comments

This is an interesting piece of writing, time being such a complex thing. Each day a new gift for us to explore, and hopefully use well. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Irene *hug*

Man is finite even life on this earth giving one's best got to do it right in the eyes of God everyone has the chance!

I'm In awe of your divine beauty Your poetry sweep me away I'm so bless with you as a friend I love it 10++++++++++++++++++++

Very nicely written...

Yes there is a time for us...a time such as this. I feel your heart beat in these words. Time never stands still yet there is a time for us. Well done Meggie

Time is precious, like water! A successful man is when you know how to manage your time.

VERY WELL EXPRESSED...TIME IN OUR HANDS WE GIVE IT ALL SHADES AND LOSE IT'S ORIGINAL...LOVELY POEM ON A LOVELY SUBJECT.....10

Yes..there is always a time for us But memories however vague Still color our world of make believe Reminiscent of an era not so long ago Taken by light as another dimension The wherefores, and henceforth Man so solid in light ------- Like the classic music box song a time for us...true and well said my friend...couldnt say more...huhuhu I have to accept there is a time for us all...10+++

The hurriedness and possessiveness of time is well illuminated in this poem yielding some useful thoughts. Time is priceless and one cannot own it rather use it with splendor. Life is all about timing and every wise moment elapsed can bring about bright changes in one's life with unattainable becomes attain- -able and unbelievable becomes believeable. Another facet of the poem explains the misconception of time that it changes things but you have conceptualized it otherwise and conveyed this inspirational message that it is not time though it is precious that changes the fate, it is our own wisdom and truthfulness that bring about the changes.....

A timeless poem written with insight and intelligence. It's only as you age that you appreciate the preciousness of each minute. When we were young, life seemed eternal. These days, each new day must be accepted is a gift from God. Your final stanza is particularly eloquent. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Nicely expressed Maggie, well done. Warmly, Jerry

well said dear lady.... very much so.

Beautiful job. Very focused and eloquent. Sound, sense and rhythm are masterfully balanced.

beautifully penned indeed! 10+

wonderful poem.wonderful idea voted10 surya

Time meted out to us...brief or not it is for us to act...to act in order to meet God...ultimate meet Thanks for your good meaningful write Meggie, inviting urging to think beyond...10

This poem is written with much thought and understanding. A '10! ' for you, dear Meggie. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

meggie you write with such emotion and beauty lovely poem

This is a most touching and beautifully expressed poem, Meggie, and I loved your title, which is reminescent of a song from the Broadway play, 'West Side Story' of many years ago. The poem, of course, speaks of life and time in a different light than the show song did. It is a most impressive and thought-provoking poem, and was a delight to read. Carl.

Meggie you remind me in your lovely words that time is a gift from God and we should use it wisely ... Bless you Alf