Tuesday, February 3, 2009

A Time Before Machines Comments

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I remember a time before the machines
before we were forced into slavery
ignorant of what was happening to us
we spent our hours staring at a screen
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Florence P. Wordsmith
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Jim Norausky 04 February 2009

I like this poem for the message it contains-'to prove that we were still connected' Thank you. Jim

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Aldo Kraas 03 February 2009

Well Menonights do everything by hand They don't believe in electricity They use the old washing mashing thad wash clothes by turning the handle They are very old

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 February 2009

This speaks the truth about our lives today. The only solace would be the discovery of that someone we could sit beside of. That, I think, is what your poem says. GW62

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Malcolm Bacchus 03 February 2009

I am really feelings this, we become absorbed into the theory of modernization and forget about how life really used to be. Thats why I live on a farm, so I could get away from 'machines'

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