A Time Comments

dear alf......the wrath and war amonst countrys, i believe will culminate into a lot of devastations, till we have the final peace.nothing yet everything is in mans hands, yet peace has become a wishful dream.your poems are really very intelligent and interesting.thanks for sharing. ritty

It will be worth it when the time for peace has finally come. It is an interesting piece.

very nice poem..a time to reap when it's ready to harvest..a time for peace when war ends..beautiful poem..grace

yeh we all know a time for everything but when is that time for 'peace' when? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? lovely write dear Alf -10 anjali

interesting poem..a time of all time to we think about from the old world to the modern one, just for comparison and no doubt about you expressed it well we need peace and there is a time of it and must happen probably soon in one time....nice provoking theme...10

Alf my friend, please first may I apologise in my delay in returning to you, but I have been rushed off my feet promoting my new book...but I'm so glad to be back posting and commenting again....And to read such beauty and understanding within your works just makes me smile knowing that my friends here are still very much the bench mark here at PH....thanks for the share of your fine work my friend....a treasured pleasure

There's a time for us to ponder, the time to talk about peace................and peace.No more lives wasting! ! !

The last line is extremely interesting.

a good expression of time and its value and importance..grace

i liked this poem...10 tahnx for sharing

Your poem echoes the thoughts of most people, how do we stop it? Man, who has done so many good things will ultimately destroy everything too, it is so scary, Well penned, 10 Lynda xx

Frightening and so true Alf, although many prefer to bury their heads in the sand. Like the Big C, great affliction is spreading and the sands of time is running out - our poor children to have lived only in this horror of hate and destruction

yes it seems the big blast is on the horizon as Iran continues the provocation and the valley of Armaegeddon is soon to be filled with the rivers of blood....the coordinates already keyed in the computers only waiting for Amhadjinejad's statement that gives the go ahead and Tehran will no longer exist

Your poetic verse has said it all, sadly i think the prophecy will come true a brilliant and thought provoking poem Alf regards Bob

A very thought provoking poem elaborating the dimension that enables two identical events occurring at the same point in space to be distinguished, measured by the interval between the events. If mankind would continue to do the illegalities, it will surely dissipate from the face of the planet. Everyone should conceive the true essence of the poem considering the message conveyed in it........10/10

thought provoking...the message comes out loud and clear...the last verse is excellent

A very powerful poem Alf, causing many thoughts and the knowledge of mankinds insanity.......................10

Thoughts provoking splendid moving poem on time. You have spread your message over the lines. Intelligent composition,10++

A beautiful poem in time always make us happy to read in time..... you have brought pain and the value of time in a very good way to read.......thanking you in sharing.........

A time for all.....fine rhymes and diction, well put up and structured...........10+++