Saturday, February 10, 2007

A Time Comments

Rating: 2.7

There will come a time,
I feel that it's only destiny,
when I will not be able, strong or willing,
to walk the extra mile,
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Barry Van Allen
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Kee Thampi 31 October 2007

drinking me some juice, hating old -age benefits, and just plain hangin' loose! (we make it in heart..........)

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Con Nie 31 March 2007

Good one. And yes the ending is great. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 22 March 2007

Hi Barry... loved the twist at the end. I always enjoy a bit of dark humor to make a point, and you do it so well

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Dee Daffodil 11 February 2007

You really think you would be old and cranky? ? ? Careful...they might just kick you outta the home! ! Seriously though...you've hit on another subject that comes into my life on a fairly regular basis...aging, and death (ok...among other things) . I like this one Barry. Hugs, Dee

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