A Thunderstorm Comments

nice poem...I like the way it builds up to the climax towards the end...

I like your metaphoric expressions particularly, in this poem. Nice write.

Well done on making member poet of the day, very good imagery used in your poem.

Good use of imagery...I admire this so so so much.

Beautifully unusual...pregnant clouds and children engrossed in the weather, singing and dancing...lovely tyvm karen

mood for appreciating the beauty of the rains... well created

A day when the clouds look grey and the thunder storms gather and the king trees bow...nice to read in your style...regards

You creating a rhythmic in a nice rhyme, it is another form than the first one i read, again you did a good job..The future still one of the different..i like both of these poem, keep it up for more_Unwritten Soul

This has a nice rhyme scheme...Your structure needs some work so that each line will flow smoothly into the next.Hhowever, for the most part it is in synch, and I enjoyed the read...~FjR~.

Lovely picture of cloud as mother of rain.Wow!

Good poem_! Last part could use work

A lovely write in a traditional form.... enjoyable, well formed and I like that there is much thought in the structure...tyvm.. karen