your heart beats shaped in a sorrowful poem..
filled by the heat of a hot ZONE, ..
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An interesting and intriguing write, reads quite beautifully, I have experienced the beauty of a desert dawn, the cool before the raging heat, it gives a silence which reflects and gi ves a peace so filled with beauty of the moment.
Astonishing. Fabulous. Remarakable. Stunning. Amazing. Terrific. Splendid.
Creative thought-waves at work, especially the title..Thunder sighing.... hmmmm.....that might somehow qualify as a form of meteorological paralysis by its' rumbling cessation, alone! ! lol! Inventive Work, young lady... F j R (09)
very nice...tamarah you have connected impossibilities in to a string of beautiful lines to enjoy great cheers
Excellent; your poems have a great deal of depth, which the detail cant make up for! Grade A stuff!
An intriguing, very short and oddly structured poem that has some pretty deep meaning. Strangely enough, I enjoyed it.
Hey, ....... loneliness in dawn... a near neologism... thanks for your corments on my wee poetrty looking forward for valued comments [and criticism] on my doodles regards dr. sakti 22.06.09. India.
nice poem, yeah true! some times silence is even louder than thunder....
A real poet pushes a while and read....just a little pep...then your poem ignite us to read and write more beautiful poem...so Beautiful indeed...a 10+
' beautiful to read....heart of the hot zone...amezing..' regards