Tuesday, June 9, 2009

A Thunder's Sighing Tone Comments

Rating: 4.4

your heart beats shaped in a sorrowful poem..

filled by the heat of a hot ZONE, ..
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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Seema Gupta 26 September 2009

' beautiful to read....heart of the hot zone...amezing..' regards

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Bob Blackwell 02 August 2009

An interesting and intriguing write, reads quite beautifully, I have experienced the beauty of a desert dawn, the cool before the raging heat, it gives a silence which reflects and gi ves a peace so filled with beauty of the moment.

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Mubeen Sadhika 31 July 2009

Astonishing. Fabulous. Remarakable. Stunning. Amazing. Terrific. Splendid.

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R. Manoj Mohan 24 July 2009

The last line makes one mystified.....Well done.

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Ted M 22 July 2009

Nice comparisons here

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Smiley Hooker 21 July 2009

This poem sighs beautifully. Thanks for sharing :)

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Gerald Hamilton Jr. 13 July 2009

Stuning just stuning ty for sharing...

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 13 July 2009

A very nice thought provoking piece.cheers mam.....

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Creative thought-waves at work, especially the title..Thunder sighing.... hmmmm.....that might somehow qualify as a form of meteorological paralysis by its' rumbling cessation, alone! ! lol! Inventive Work, young lady... F j R (09)

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Saadat Tahir 03 July 2009

very nice...tamarah you have connected impossibilities in to a string of beautiful lines to enjoy great cheers

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Shawnee Gonzalez 02 July 2009

its a beautiful interesting peice!

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Ency Bearis 28 June 2009

splendid poem...thought provoking....nice....

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Hamd Ejaz 26 June 2009

Excellent; your poems have a great deal of depth, which the detail cant make up for! Grade A stuff!

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Mel Atie 24 June 2009

very short but deep meaning. I like it.

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Alex Gomez 24 June 2009

An intriguing, very short and oddly structured poem that has some pretty deep meaning. Strangely enough, I enjoyed it.

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Hey, ....... loneliness in dawn... a near neologism... thanks for your corments on my wee poetrty looking forward for valued comments [and criticism] on my doodles regards dr. sakti 22.06.09. India.

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Kurt Behle 22 June 2009

Not bad at all...Actually it is good.8 lines = 10 and 8 ++++++++

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nice poem, yeah true! some times silence is even louder than thunder....

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Obinna Eruchie 21 June 2009

a wonderful composition.

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Antonio Liao 20 June 2009

A real poet pushes a while and read....just a little pep...then your poem ignite us to read and write more beautiful poem...so Beautiful indeed...a 10+

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