Wednesday, June 9, 2010

A Thrilling Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling that quiver deep inside;
Shaking literally,
Excited inside out,
Heart jumping into the throat;
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vinitha nandagopal
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Kee Thampi 22 June 2010

this poetess express her soul into words and then to our inner.... Though i've waited long enough I feel my soul tremble At the thought of living into the moment.. But then i dont want to stop anything now, Let alone my thoughts; Which might erupt like a volcano,

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Sreekala Sukumaran 22 June 2010

Well written nice flow of wordings enjoyed it...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 June 2010

‘Brain says control it, /But the heart says enjoy it...’…beauty applause ‘To savor every moment of it.../With starry eyes and a thudding heart. ‘…to feel the rhapsodic moments…terrific write…thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [for beaut moment]

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