Monday, March 16, 2015

A Threnody Comments

Rating: 5.0

I should have said this on that sad 9th of December,
The year 2009 when your breath forsook the corporeal,
And went to repose among the gleefully dancing stars;
And Delay to say this deals my soul an incurable beal.
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Hannington Mumo
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Patricia Grantham 24 April 2015

Very intense and deep poem. Life will only shine for a little while then loses its luster. A fate that that is inevitable. Good work.

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Nancy Oyula 16 March 2015

Beautifully written, Well expressed piece..

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Nancy Oyula 16 March 2015

Beautifully written, Well expressed piece..

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Dave Walker 16 March 2015

A powerful poem, a great write.

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