I resolve to write her up
A thousand words a day
And ask her if she'll want me
In some old fashioned way
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thanks for your comment! ! ! ! ! you seem like a sweet person keep writting....... i love this poem by the way!
10 points! Great write Rommel! I hope this lady appreciates your love and talent: o) Beautiful, loving and so romantic...Well done!
awesome, true to ur heart the feelings are keep always writing such beautiful poems Pradnya
Hi Rommel - This is a lovely tribute to some lucky lady! Thank you for sharing with me. xxxCheryl
This one sounds like the lyrics to a love song. There is a refreshing honesty and generosity in your words. Hope she's worth it. Love, Allie xxxx
wow... touching...I had goosebumps while reading your poem. And feeling how they felt passed on to e the 'magic' you were saying the poem. good job! =)
Wow so touching and sad... its very good though! It makes me think twice wat others think about people!
Wow...You write such lovely poetry...I hope by now, the lady who is the object of your poems, knows of your admiration for her. Hugs, dee
I would go for the 'a thousand words a day' strategy..A lovely poem from you Wishing you joy Pia