Monday, February 11, 2008

A Thousand Outstretched Arms Comments

Rating: 4.8

I’ve walked this path a hundred times
Above me in bright spring sunshine
A thousand bare arms stretch for the sky
Under my feet, gnarled tree roots exposed
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Bill Smith
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Bob Oldfield 22 February 2008

Wow - strong and forceful images wrap themselves around my mind! ! ! Loved it!

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Under my feet, gnarled tree roots exposed Appear like the arthritic fingers of an old widow Awesome simile

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Broken Peaces 11 February 2008

A very full and constructive write bill full of content and imagry 10 Chris

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