He gazed blankly
not sure of his own sight
the track was already in the vicinity
a thousand miles journey had began
...
Read full text
Anxiety, uncertainty a mix of confusion and hope brought out well.Good piece Rose
Only for a period of time! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Mmmh the suspense brings the message home, death comes as it so wishes. Thank you Poetess
awesome piece over there.we need reunion for sure in different aspects.
Oh no! The 2nd stanza, just make me sad. You just nailed your poem Rose, thank you for sharing!
Your welcome, that is the life that some have to experience in real life
Every journey comes to a halt at some point. Let us also enjoy the journey when it lasts.