Friday, August 5, 2016

A Thousand Miles Journey Comments

Rating: 4.8

He gazed blankly
not sure of his own sight
the track was already in the vicinity
a thousand miles journey had began
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Rose Kanana
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Aisha Masha 06 January 2017

Every journey comes to a halt at some point. Let us also enjoy the journey when it lasts.

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Ruth Nyokabi 10 September 2016

Anxiety, uncertainty a mix of confusion and hope brought out well.Good piece Rose

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James Mwenda 06 September 2016

Short lived happiness..death is painful good flow

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Collins Waswa 25 August 2016

Uncertainty, death, brought out well.Thanks for sharing Rose

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 August 2016

Only for a period of time! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dedan Onyango 10 August 2016

Mmmh the suspense brings the message home, death comes as it so wishes. Thank you Poetess

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Charity Karimi 07 August 2016

awesome piece over there.we need reunion for sure in different aspects.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 07 August 2016

Oh no! The 2nd stanza, just make me sad. You just nailed your poem Rose, thank you for sharing!

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Rose Kanana 08 August 2016

Your welcome, that is the life that some have to experience in real life

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Menato San 06 August 2016

Woow it's really good i like it so much.Thanks for sharing

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Rose Kanana 06 August 2016

Thanks for your comment Maneto

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