Wednesday, May 9, 2007

A Thousand Lights From A Mountain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I stand
In darkness of uncertainty
On the edge of a cliff in the middle of a night
A cool breeze is chilling my spine
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COMMENTS
Ella Marien Jacobs 01 January 2010

This one speaks volumes! The words seem to live...you can feel the confusion, the darkness, the struggle...oh I can go on. You express the poem in a gr8 way!

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Manonton Dalan 20 September 2008

nice dream frankie... amazing you remember it and write beautifully. you ain't falling down... you are about to wake up. it's transition between sleep and awake. thanks for sharing.md

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Madly In Love 09 May 2007

Wonderful i love this poem it is filled with such feeling M.Z

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