Monday, September 28, 2009

A Thousand Eyes Comments

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A thousand eyes peered from the hillsides,
nestled there amongst a great, green sea;
a sea of grass, but nonetheless a sea...
and the dandelions laughed at you and me.
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david lessard
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 02 February 2010

Wonderful write! The scene comes alive and the words paint a picture in verse, complete with the tender emotions.

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Patricia Gale 01 October 2009

Beautiful, I love this one David!

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david lessard

david lessard

gardner, massachusetts
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