Thursday, September 24, 2009

-a Thousand Dreams Come True- Comments

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I know it seems so fast, my time here,
But it feels so right that I hold you near,
I know the risks that I take,
But there is a wish that I want to make,
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Hieu Nguyen
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Bryan Alexander 24 September 2009

That is really good. I like the flow of it. The last stanza is great....10

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