Monday, July 27, 2009

A Thought Passes In The Mind Comments

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a thought flies by in the mind
like a cloud past the moon;
like a bird flying just above
or like a cyclist past you
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Raj Arumugam
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Ramesh T A 02 August 2009

I have noticed them all and I have such experiences often! Nice!

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Duh Huh 01 August 2009

Wow. I love this poem. Short, simple and sweet, but it packs a powerful thought provoking punch to the brain. Thank you so much for sharing Raj. :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 July 2009

a thought flies by in the mind like a cloud past the moon; What a fine image you have created Raj. Really beautiful. Beyond any rating.... Best Regards Naseer

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Patti Masterman 29 July 2009

Clever poem. I love the comparisons you make of other ephemeral things that are here-again gone-again, in the blink of an eye.

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Catrina Heart 27 July 2009

Lovely thought in a short piece...Thanks! ! !

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