Now what can be more beautiful than her
Soft face? I’ve thought and thought about it long.
Not even fields of daffodils or song
Can measure to the light she brings I’m sure.
...
Read full text
i like your writing. from what i've read so far, you have this awesome ability to make your words flow and everything just seems to fit and sound right, even when you're not rhyming. Good job, i can't wait to read more. :)
wow, it sounds so pretty, something out of a black and white movie. :) beautiful,