In a blink of light my conscience is awake.
My senses open yet what is there to take?
Into my understanding I seek for something,
A reason for which makes life truly worth living.
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You poem rings such truth to me and I love your rhyming style. Keep Writing, Marvin - you are on the right track with your life and with your writing. Best Wishes, Marilyn
A THOUGHT OF GOD.....very unique and with sensibility...you have also a deeper perception about life....hope you can read my EXTRAORDINARY LINES here, my depthness represents too.I am also in...to acrostic poems. With respect, Your kababayan, Simonette
when u are created his own image how can they you sinner? this is only thing confusing me...
A thought provoking poem with perfect rhythm and flow. He sent us here because still there is hope, We are here because we can cope. He designed us to always win, We let us down with a sense of sin.
Ammmmmazing thoughtful composition with fine ryhm/rythm......10+