Tuesday, July 29, 2008

(a Thought Of God) Comments

Rating: 4.7

In a blink of light my conscience is awake.
My senses open yet what is there to take?
Into my understanding I seek for something,
A reason for which makes life truly worth living.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 October 2008

Ammmmmazing thoughtful composition with fine ryhm/rythm......10+

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Marilyn Lott 23 September 2008

You poem rings such truth to me and I love your rhyming style. Keep Writing, Marvin - you are on the right track with your life and with your writing. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Simonette Brebenariu 23 September 2008

A THOUGHT OF GOD.....very unique and with sensibility...you have also a deeper perception about life....hope you can read my EXTRAORDINARY LINES here, my depthness represents too.I am also in...to acrostic poems. With respect, Your kababayan, Simonette

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premji premji 14 August 2008

when u are created his own image how can they you sinner? this is only thing confusing me...

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Pied Piper Berry 08 August 2008

Your poem flowed well. I enjoyed reading it.

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C. P. Sharma 08 August 2008

A thought provoking poem with perfect rhythm and flow. He sent us here because still there is hope, We are here because we can cope. He designed us to always win, We let us down with a sense of sin.

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Chitra - 07 August 2008

a wonderful write with great ryhme there

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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