Friday, September 23, 2016

A Thought In Progress Comments

Rating: 5.0

I puzzle over how two things
become one thing, and wonder
if it is a matter of knowing, or
acting, or some third operation,
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Daniel Brick
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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2022

Yes, the purity of thought must reside in a blessed soul... Great expression.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2016

You bring in a wonderful idea of a new heart. Where is it lodged? near the physical heart? ? Or does it reside in the soul? Truth, beauty goodness, Abandoning the puzzle to enter into the Heraclitean river that changes with every step. So many ideas packed up in a poem. It made me think a lot. Before writing this comment I read your poem many many times. A wonderful original creation dear Brick, thank you very much

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Nosheen Irfan 04 October 2016

When Truth, Beauty n Goodness combine, we are near to a state of perfection. In some part of us, we are striving to achieve a union of mind n heart. Our thoughts evolve n progress n we experience spiritual bliss. Very philosophical n spiritual write that raises fundamental questions.10

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Dimitrios Galanis 23 September 2016

The last verses answer to the difficult situation and question we often enter under despairs life brings us into.

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