Wednesday, October 17, 2012

A Thought Captured In Her Eyes Comments

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A thought descended over, Her;
Lustrous Eyes; brimmed with dreams,
To ascent over Her Childish Smile-
Unknown! Fear - prejudice of his cycle.
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Deb Panda
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Hazel Durham 24 July 2015

I didn't understand this poem but your notes makes it clear, a beautiful message of how a smile can lighten your day with feelings of joy and thankfulness for such a simple gesture! Thanks for sharing!

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So Close 12 December 2012

very good write..the notes improved the beauty of the poem...very good write, »so close«

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Neetha Sasidharan 11 December 2012

a good thought for the day through a grt poem....keep going on.........grt...

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Asif Andalib 23 November 2012

Lovely write. Thanks for the notes. I enjoyed reading it

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