Tuesday, November 5, 2013

A Thought Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the saddened light, beamed by the descending sun
Don't make your heart heavy and go on moaning.
Don't even feel to be faded and decayed -
At this mid - way of your mortal life.
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Roseann Shawiak 12 April 2015

Oh, if we only could retrieve our innocence and purity of childhood, so much happier we would be. Our inner child is beautiful and deserving of living life fully once again through our wonderful memories. It was such a simple life back then, filled with love, happiness and joy, not the pain and suffering of growing older that we have become accustomed to. A very poignant and thought-provoking poem, Amitava, with your unique flair of philosophy as an added touch to your meaning. Great poem, I enjoyed reading it! ! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Jitesh Shah 24 March 2014

nice thought poem for middle aged person and also read my poem

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Valsa George 25 December 2013

This is a sagacious thought on life and its priorities! Instead of losing oneself in gloomy thoughts, find out where real beauty and peace lie! Our excessive preoccupation with hoarding of wealth and power cannot give us lasting happiness! What is needed is a sinless, greedless life! ! Enjoyed!

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Romeo Della Valle 04 December 2013

Bravo! A highly positive and spiritually touching write that is inspiring and well crafted! Sorry for my late response to your invitation which I find very honorable! Judging from this thought provoking write, I can see the great quality and talented poetic approach you take when it comes to life! 10+++ I am very impressed and speechless with this amazing work! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Regards from New York City

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Damian Cranney 28 November 2013

A poignant thought, if only we could retrieve our lost innocence. But being human, we would then be yearning to repeat those moment which originally created the loss. well expressed Amitava.

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Suman Kumar Das 25 November 2013

a great idea.....beautifully expressed. i get inspired. Sir................... welcome to my page!

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Hazel Durham 24 November 2013

Cherish the child that is still within us and look at this world with wonder always, to allow the sun to light our way paved with love and joy, may our light never fade! ! Captivating write! !

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Patricia Grantham 21 November 2013

A lovely uplifting write Honorable Poet. Many good wishes for a person traveling through their journey of life. The mind should be filled with the innocence of childhood. We would all like to go back in time. Healthy words for a good life. Nice.

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Heather Wilkins 16 November 2013

may this life discover the priceless jewel a sinless pure and a pious ho; y life. a good thought

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