I can see but am not there
Here so close to the suns glare
Deep in the mists of the galaxy
Weightless to infinity
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Really good poem. Great imagery and tone. I'd give this a 10.
Love this, feels like daydreaming.........my favourite state. alana
Hi Gord This is one of your best ever poems. I like the imagery and the mysticism within it. It seems that 'Love Poems', are not the only area in which your talent blossoms.. Steve
But sometimes coming to much! Great metaphors Gordon. Mark