Talking to a friend last night,
they were saying how
inspiration had deserted them.
I suggested several methods
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great write, David, and remember a thorn maketh a rose! best wishes
Great Idea Dave.A bit like the round we played at Stratford wher we each took continuation stanzas.That was fun but this is much more interesting and will look out for your work. All the best Dave, Sid.
Love the title, David. The two ladies are roses, for sure, but you are definitely not a thorn! ! A great idea to collaborate on a poem. I have read it and cannot find the seams.... a good team. Looking forward to the next. Love, Fran xxx
Wonderful idea and a wonderful piece.... Mr Modesty! t x
Thanks for getting me in in this wonderful collaboration. I felt honored to be included with the most respected and terrific poet here in PH..I couldnt wait for the next..
The title is exceptional and the poem flows seamlessly - an most creative collaboration. Congratulations to you all. You make a fine trio. Looking forward to more joint efforts. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
HaHaHa HeHeHe....a thorn you say..is that why I can't explain this pain in my side.....Seriously though...your nowhere near a thorn...thorns create pain...and all you give is joy David....thanks for letting me be a part of something special
And this is a great way to start your journey David, very positive approach and out-look Thankyou for this reminder that we are here on this site to share opinions and artistic atributes Love duncan X