A thing that separates from me
Does not belong to me
And is not true
This body is separates from me
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A moving poem, with lovely expression...Nothing is ours to take...so why not leave something of value, behind, instead. Very much enjoyed your write. PEACE
Beautiful words but an editing could make it perfect.
You are right Mr. Mishra... I know nothing remain Ever with me And so nothing is mine beautiful poem Mr. Mishra
you are only with me forever. so true in the end we claim nothing
You are only with me for ever. Yes how nice it would be If the loving memories..only the loving and happy memories of this life stayed with us, (nothing else) as we move on beyond this life.. Excellent.
wow! great write....i jst wondered to see ur postings. how could you write so many poems? ur every poems has its unique style wid great msg. great.......
sir, you have a unique style of writing. i am looking forward to reading your next poem.
I recommend this for my Generation of thoroughly tired of uncertain things... It must show some light as it illuminated my dozy conscience..... eye opener...
Good work by you, thanx for ur comments.I keep waiting to get one comment and u become that one.
We are all nothing but a thought in the story of life... Nice poem...
wao what deep & pensive poem written by you...have deep profound emotions inside it...keep writing
And yet if I pinch your arm you frown at me. I say silly things to get reaction. What can I say I am ever curious of the minds of my fellow man (yes yes and woman) Do you use howjsay for pronunciation of English words? sorry.. I am in a talkative mood and this is not the place. I see your email is available... til then