Tuesday, June 26, 2007

A Thing Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have feelings for you,
and you for her,
It is always the same,
I really hate this game!
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Amanda May Moore
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Ben Gieske 06 December 2008

A lot of feelings in this one with which a lot of people can relate to. Keep writing.

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Melvina Germain 15 July 2007

I like this poem, is has a lot to say about matters of the heart, wanting to find that special one and enjoying a wholesome relationship. Your last line speaks volumns when it says 'I should live life not in doubt' yes we should never be in doubt, we are in charge of our own destiny and we make all the decisions for ourselves, Excellent poem Amanda.--Melvina--

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Eric Pennington 09 July 2007

I really like this one :) . and I do think we could have a 'fun time together': D

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Amanda May Moore

Amanda May Moore

Ypsilanti Michigan
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