A Thing That Still Hasn'T Come Up To My Lips Comments

(cont.) i came to the poet's page by accident while searching for my friend Akhtar Jawad's page. ha ha. but i enjoyed skimming the About Me/Bio, and this poem ain't bad either. a fellow-atheist! i think i may be in the BOTTOM 500 on PH. bri :)

! ! ! i think this is called a riddle, but maybe not. i'd sit here all day postulating answers to what is the secret? , but i have lots of ice cream to eat before the end of my day and can't spare the time. OH! i'm/we're not asked WHAT it is. we are only asked WHAT KIND of secret it is/is it? i'd guess it is a secret secret. let us keep it that way. (cont.)

The excellent blend of words with the essence of lips enliven my thought. Bravo work sir!

We all love you sir and also your splendid creation!

Some feelings evades capture since these cannot be expressed in word. Beautiful write.

Eyes reads the thoughts Eyes read the feelings Before the lips spreak the words Eyes captures everything! Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

Where words fail, feelings begin And eyes understand, what lips can't tell Language is so poor by design In matters of emotion, words don't jell......