Monday, May 12, 2008

A Thing Of Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Staring at nothing in a dreamy distrait
when she started humming
her mesmerizing lilt
how many hearts went distraught?
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Sathya Narayana
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Miriam Maia Padua 02 December 2008

very beautiful piece..successfully describes her irresistible beauty..(.venomous) ..tempting......unforgettable...mystical....like Helen of Troy(?) or Malena? ......a thing of beauty is a joy forever......so with your poetry

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Brenda Tamayo 20 November 2008

This poem is simply lovely.

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Mamta Agarwal 08 November 2008

you have embellished the poem with lovely imagery. yes, Sathya, our good memories help us overcome sorrow. ultimately it depends on what we focus on.10

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Tia Maria 05 October 2008

Tis I who am envious - I would love to be able to write as you do... this is enthralling: 'When she laughed in rejoice As if stars are showering from skies Soaked are the relishing Romeos In an inexplicable rapturous glow' ... beautiful, magical poetry 10 :)

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Dr. Ram Sharma 02 September 2008

a wonderful poem, well crafted

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 16 August 2008

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.......... good portrayal of a thing of beauty

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Colin J... 04 August 2008

' She usurped into my thoughts Like a swirling rivulet Washing away every hurting gloomy dirt' Beautiful... Colin J... PS. Thanks for your kind comment...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 July 2008

Amazing poem! .....a thoughtful expression indeed. 10 has been clicked with joy!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 July 2008

Poet John Keats wrote, 'A thing of beauty is joy for ever.' So, anything beautiful keeps one happy and gay, no doubt in it.

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, aryaindia 22 July 2008

Your poem shall remain a joy forever. Keep writing and attain bliss. arya.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 14 June 2008

Hello Sathya, what a beautiful poeem of romance, passion and love. I enjoyed it. If you can check out my poem 'One Again' and 'My LOve' Blessings, L C Taylor

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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