Staring at nothing in a dreamy distrait
when she started humming
her mesmerizing lilt
how many hearts went distraught?
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you have embellished the poem with lovely imagery. yes, Sathya, our good memories help us overcome sorrow. ultimately it depends on what we focus on.10
Tis I who am envious - I would love to be able to write as you do... this is enthralling: 'When she laughed in rejoice As if stars are showering from skies Soaked are the relishing Romeos In an inexplicable rapturous glow' ... beautiful, magical poetry 10 :)
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.......... good portrayal of a thing of beauty
' She usurped into my thoughts Like a swirling rivulet Washing away every hurting gloomy dirt' Beautiful... Colin J... PS. Thanks for your kind comment...
Amazing poem! .....a thoughtful expression indeed. 10 has been clicked with joy!
Poet John Keats wrote, 'A thing of beauty is joy for ever.' So, anything beautiful keeps one happy and gay, no doubt in it.
Your poem shall remain a joy forever. Keep writing and attain bliss. arya.
Hello Sathya, what a beautiful poeem of romance, passion and love. I enjoyed it. If you can check out my poem 'One Again' and 'My LOve' Blessings, L C Taylor
very beautiful piece..successfully describes her irresistible beauty..(.venomous) ..tempting......unforgettable...mystical....like Helen of Troy(?) or Malena? ......a thing of beauty is a joy forever......so with your poetry