Tuesday, July 8, 2008

*a Thing Called Fear* Comments

Rating: 3.0

I have this thing living inside of me called FEAR,
and its growing bigger and bigger year by year...
I dont know if im scared to live,
or maybe im scared to die...
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Joey Habib
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Greenwolfe 1962 19 July 2008

The last line saved this poem because his life is at stake. I gave it an 8. I recommend that the writer read my poem, 'Life's Companion.' GW62

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Linda Weischedel 08 July 2008

Amazing poem, and I can relate to most of it Joey! I am giving you a 10. ~Linda~

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Joey Habib

Joey Habib

Levittown Pa.
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