Monday, April 24, 2006

A Thief Born Early Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two boys, both blond and blue of eye
were playing at the Lorelei.
As foreign ships passed near the cliff
bold flags in morning frost were stiff.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Esther Leclerc 24 April 2006

Childhood dramas are often much more than just that, pointing to a destiny chosen. A good (if sad) read. Thank you.

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Rich Hanson 24 April 2006

I enjoyed the poem, Herbert. You can make somewhat light of the situation now. I hope that you can take legal revenge on him if nothing else for his latest nefarious activities.

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Lizzy Tomlinson 24 April 2006

Really enjoyed reading this Herbert. (10) . Lizzy.x

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Jerry Hughes 24 April 2006

Mien liebe F, I've commented previously I'm really not into narrative verse, but I make an exception with, 'A Thief Born Early, ' and you're need to write it. Early or late, this thief must be brought to account. Heil...

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Gina Onyemaechi 24 April 2006

An enjoyable, easy-reading poem with a strong moral tale...whose reality you have had the misfortune of living, Herbs. The Rhine isn't to blame. The fault lies with...the wrongdoer's mind (if you don't mind me saying) . G.

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