Friday, August 3, 2012

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There but for the Grace of God go I
My Mother always said this, whenever I would cry
I've seen so much, watching everyone feel pain
The sun was often shining, but it felt like rain
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2019

People don't understand the importance of living We seem to be just taking and not ever giving SO please take a breath and enjoy each day Life can be hard.Just stay strong and all will turn out okay......touching expression with outstanding conceptualization. You Poet's Note says much about this poem. Really it is a beautiful poem on hope and believe. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2016

Yes! ! Life can be hard. Thanks for sharing.

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Sandra Feldman 20 October 2013

Beautiful poem. Great understanding of how precious and what a miracle Life is. The importance of giving, not always taking. Very touching Lyn, right to the heart Why is it that poets ands artists understand this but the men that so badly govern us DONT? ? ?

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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

thanksgiving should abound for the things we have been blessed with. so lucky are we. lovely poem

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Deo Inji 03 August 2012

That's a very generous & thoughtful poem, Lyn! I especially love the last stanza.

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