A Terrible Pain Comments

Such a great poem, Shakil.... a huge 10+++++

The gift of life is not forever and our mortality we all have to face. Thankyou

Totally awesome and yet heart-breaking poem. Such beautiful and tender feelings and emotions lie within your words throughout it. Rhythm is impeccable and adds to the silent feelings of sorrow. A truly remarkable insight you have portrayed. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

I will sink into oblivion. - NO! if you become saint - people will remember you forever! ! !