Sunday, January 15, 2006

A Tender Moment At The Supermarket Comments

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Sitting there watching them
they had no idea
they were such an inspiration
so comfortable with eachother.
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Mary Nagy
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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2008

You see the world through a poet's eyes Mary and express with great eloquence and simplicity that comfortable love which lasts till death us do part. Beautiful penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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James B. Earley 26 June 2008

Ah the power of observations! A passionate composition.

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Lily Espinosa 02 November 2007

This is an absoultely wonderful poem. Beautifully sad.

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Sid John Gardner. 12 May 2007

Mary your observation on this occasion was excellent.A good composition that took us through a snapshot of everyday life.Very well done. All the best Sid John.

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Willow Moon Pearce 03 March 2006

Very tender and moving Mary, thanks...............willow

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Scarlett Treat 01 February 2006

I should live so long, to have such a Knight in Shining Armor. She was lucky to have such a Protector, and a writer such as Mary Nagy to describe their love so well.

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Shannon Chapel 29 January 2006

This is fabulous, Mary. I could see them through your words. Lovely and tender. Shannon

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Wanda Swim Strunk 27 January 2006

It's gift to pick up the subtle side of human emotion and behavior. This poem does both well and conveys it well to me. Mary, this is truly wonderful.

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Duncan Wyllie 24 January 2006

Mary, I know that it may seem a bit strange but I had to come back to this poem. It was just so good and it carries something more in it then I can discribe with may limited use of language.It really is Amazing! Caring! , timely! , Atmospheric! so many things that are real food for inspiration. You haven't done it again Mary because to my mind this is the greatest of your acheivements so far. Thankyou......... Love Duncan

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Viren Dangwal 23 January 2006

Yes, you have it in you, mary

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Lori Boulard 23 January 2006

It's raining this morning as I read this, and my mood just went up about twenty notches. This is beautiful, Mary!

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Duncan Wyllie 22 January 2006

Dear Mary I could picture the scene, and feel the meaning! You're A Star. Thankyou Love Duncan

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Josette Reeves 21 January 2006

This is just wonderful Mary, beautiful and tender xx

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Ernestine Northover 16 January 2006

Hi Mary, Yep, delightful. Loved every line. Beautifully written with such understanding and feeling for them. Thanks. Love Ernestine XXX

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Michael Shepherd 16 January 2006

So perfectly expressed, so perfectly rounded off - the compassion of the open heart. Supersized thanks!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 16 January 2006

Exactly Allan. Also the poem is technically very well done IMO, and its unpretentiousness is evident. Best H

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Uriah Hamilton 15 January 2006

Maybe somethings last forever, I just can't prove it.

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Allan James Saywell 15 January 2006

i like the simplicity and deep honesty in this poem about enduring love from one human being to another and age should not be an issue with love with another ten or twenty poems like this for your book Warm regards AJS

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Another non-rhyming but totally rhtyhmic winner, Mary! Absolutely lovely.

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kskdnj sajn 15 January 2006

Mary this was a beautiful poem, and yes...very inspiring. I believe we all wish for love to endure as long as we live, but it is indeed rare to see it...and what a gift that day must have been. Thank you Angie

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