A Tender Moment At The Supermarket Comments

You see the world through a poet's eyes Mary and express with great eloquence and simplicity that comfortable love which lasts till death us do part. Beautiful penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Ah the power of observations! A passionate composition.

This is an absoultely wonderful poem. Beautifully sad.

Mary your observation on this occasion was excellent.A good composition that took us through a snapshot of everyday life.Very well done. All the best Sid John.

Very tender and moving Mary, thanks...............willow

I should live so long, to have such a Knight in Shining Armor. She was lucky to have such a Protector, and a writer such as Mary Nagy to describe their love so well.

This is fabulous, Mary. I could see them through your words. Lovely and tender. Shannon

It's gift to pick up the subtle side of human emotion and behavior. This poem does both well and conveys it well to me. Mary, this is truly wonderful.

Mary, I know that it may seem a bit strange but I had to come back to this poem. It was just so good and it carries something more in it then I can discribe with may limited use of language.It really is Amazing! Caring! , timely! , Atmospheric! so many things that are real food for inspiration. You haven't done it again Mary because to my mind this is the greatest of your acheivements so far. Thankyou......... Love Duncan

Yes, you have it in you, mary

It's raining this morning as I read this, and my mood just went up about twenty notches. This is beautiful, Mary!

Dear Mary I could picture the scene, and feel the meaning! You're A Star. Thankyou Love Duncan

This is just wonderful Mary, beautiful and tender xx

Hi Mary, Yep, delightful. Loved every line. Beautifully written with such understanding and feeling for them. Thanks. Love Ernestine XXX

So perfectly expressed, so perfectly rounded off - the compassion of the open heart. Supersized thanks!

Exactly Allan. Also the poem is technically very well done IMO, and its unpretentiousness is evident. Best H

Maybe somethings last forever, I just can't prove it.

i like the simplicity and deep honesty in this poem about enduring love from one human being to another and age should not be an issue with love with another ten or twenty poems like this for your book Warm regards AJS

Another non-rhyming but totally rhtyhmic winner, Mary! Absolutely lovely.

Mary this was a beautiful poem, and yes...very inspiring. I believe we all wish for love to endure as long as we live, but it is indeed rare to see it...and what a gift that day must have been. Thank you Angie