Sitting there watching them
they had no idea
they were such an inspiration
so comfortable with eachother.
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Were we discussing marriage after your new poem! Here's the inspiration!
When I read this one before Mary I loved it, you have captured life so well, the caring and loving side. Love Ernestine XXX
Heartwarming and beautiful indeed. Looking on at others' love always induces the feeling of loneliness so perfectly hinted at in the end of this piece.
This is a very fragile piece Mary. If you took one word out, it seems that the whole poem would fall apart. A tender piece with a lovely, dreamy flow to it.
Mary, This is the kind of love everyone dreams about. I read your poem and dream of a lifetime of growing old with my soulmate. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story.
Mary, Sweet poem...something to hope for. I love the title! Hugs, Dee
MARY..WHAT A BEUTIFUL DEPICTION OF THE LOVE THAT ONLY GROWS, AND NEVER WAVERS....SUCH METICULOUS DETAIL, CRAFTSMANSHIP GOING ON HERE...SO GOOD TO SEE YA PENNIN' AGAIN! '''''''''''''''''''FRANK
This brought a tear to my eyes... we should all be so lucky to have this when we get to that age. What a touching story.... you've stopped to smell the roses for us, captured that moment perfectly in your words.... ~~Lee