Wednesday, June 14, 2006

~a Tender Moment At The Supermarket~ Comments

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Sitting there watching them
they had no idea
they were such an inspiration
so comfortable with eachother.
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Mary Nagy
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Lee Degnan 04 November 2006

This brought a tear to my eyes... we should all be so lucky to have this when we get to that age. What a touching story.... you've stopped to smell the roses for us, captured that moment perfectly in your words.... ~~Lee

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Linda Hepner 18 June 2006

Were we discussing marriage after your new poem! Here's the inspiration!

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Ernestine Northover 15 June 2006

When I read this one before Mary I loved it, you have captured life so well, the caring and loving side. Love Ernestine XXX

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Heartwarming and beautiful indeed. Looking on at others' love always induces the feeling of loneliness so perfectly hinted at in the end of this piece.

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Joseph Daly 15 June 2006

This is a very fragile piece Mary. If you took one word out, it seems that the whole poem would fall apart. A tender piece with a lovely, dreamy flow to it.

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Dalia Butterfly 14 June 2006

Mary, This is the kind of love everyone dreams about. I read your poem and dream of a lifetime of growing old with my soulmate. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story.

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Dee Daffodil 14 June 2006

Mary, Sweet poem...something to hope for. I love the title! Hugs, Dee

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MARY..WHAT A BEUTIFUL DEPICTION OF THE LOVE THAT ONLY GROWS, AND NEVER WAVERS....SUCH METICULOUS DETAIL, CRAFTSMANSHIP GOING ON HERE...SO GOOD TO SEE YA PENNIN' AGAIN! '''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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