Thursday, May 8, 2008

A Temptress Comments

Rating: 5.0

I passed by you once
Our eyes met by chance
You asked why I stared
You are sexy I bared
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Duncan Wyllie 22 May 2008

I think that it was Oscar Wilde who said that, 'I can resist everything but temptation. Ummm, My advice would be to steer well clear when you can Love duncan X

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Jurietta Duraan 21 May 2008

True.... even though you are committed, you like to be tempted... very nice poem, Marvin.

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 May 2008

it is an elixir most guys would swear, , , , nice lines and good poem

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S... Che 21 May 2008

this poem is on my favourite. Very well written. Thanks for sharing

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this is the real -pilipino sweetness....love it

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 May 2008

Sounds like a sweet Temptation to me, one look sparks the fires of Creativity... Andrew 10

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Original Unknown Girl 08 May 2008

Interesting and risque! Like it! HG; -) xx

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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