A Temporary Man Comments

Fantastic... as usual! Kudos

Most of my women friends have this dream, that they will meet the.perfect' man. When you find him tell me who and where he is as I need a pair of old walking boots mending...

No more than a distraction.Many a true word.

hmmm...........permanence has its own advantages............well penned

this is really expressed well- congrats-

This life is temporal. So do not look for a permanent partner. Very good expression.

The observation here suggests the temporary man is endowed with certain attributes considered favorable. I see no evident plan of elimination. My question is.....could there possibly be more here than you're sharing? ? ? ? Whatever.....it's a 10....... Thanks...

very true, i think the temp is more like (if I may invite you to read my Eye Candy) topten I say

From your lips to God's ears! Another beauty! ~Ray

Fran, I liked this as it left me pondering for an appropriate comment to make. Grand poem as usual. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

This is written with a flare of sensitivity and kindness, I really enjoyed reading it Thankyou Fran Take care Love duncan X

Trouble is Fran, when we start off we don't know if temporary man is going to become permanant man, then we can get hurt, as usual an excellent piece which gets one thinking, love Lynda xx

Superb contrasts here Fran, wisely and eloquently penned... j x

Hmmm... what to say? Well, a temporary man can be changed and exchanged and when done with we can send him off if he's deranged! (Sorry I couldn't resist that!) Though a permanent man, if he's the one and understands, will certainly give you all the love you demand.....and demand..... and demand! ! Yeah, I think the latter would be preferable all right, though the former can be lots of fun! ! Erm.... shall I get out of your inbox now? HG: -) xx

Yes. Eloquently and succinctly stated. We know which we prefer, yes......? t x

Talk about faint praise (I am referring to the comment under me - sorry I couldn't resist) . This is brilliant! Great theme, impeccably presented. A thoroughly enchanting piece. love, Allie xxxx

wow thats pretty good, care to take a look at my poems?