When the morning star,
Sees first sun ray,
And disappears,
In grief and distress,
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Sir, this is a great piece of poetry to be read time and again!
A great poem sir! I never hesitate to read this perceptive work time and again!
This is my favorite poem sir! My great pleasure reading this beautiful poem repeatedly to my utmost satisfaction!
The superb imagery coupled with wonderful words and thoughts transport a reader to a different time and place and made him /her a witness of a beautiful scene. Yet, the poignancy of this write made us feel the hurt and longings of a teen aged widow. War will drastically change a beautiful life into loneliness and meaningless life. A deeply moving and touching poem.
A fascinating piece of works sir! I get enormous pleasure in reading this magnificent poem time and again!
War and its worst effect. Young war widows could be a national pride but at whose loss that pride succeeds? . Life is cruel indeed. You build up the dual contrasting images much poetically in the poem 10+
Tact, act! Pact and fact; Teenage, Muse of the aftermath, Teen aged widow! ! After the war, Wickedness of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A great poem sir! I derive enormous pleasure in reading this wonderful piece of poetry again and again!
I find everyone, So happy and enjoying, The gift of life....The poet how beautifully ask...This is my Favorite verse
This magnificent work is in my favorite list sir. I find a different taste in this great work so I read it again and again to my utmost satisfaction!
Thougful poem.I guess beauty goes hand in hand wit youth-teen.a creative poem that capture it title
A poignant, beautiful and touching write. Poem of great depth by a great Poet. A pure poetic gem.
Furthermore, when I delve deep with an analytical perspective, I find that each line articulates piteousness of the girl....you have perfectly sketched the portrait....just immaculate! I have already taken it to MyPoemList
A girl of sixteen/Seventeen or so/In a white dressing/No smile on her face/Undressed long hair/Wearing no jewelry/Looking motionless.....I can imagine the situation of that tin aged widow! A poignant piece of poetry...One of your best poems sir! My pleasure reading it time and again!
a great imagery! poetic tragi-comedy of a great virtue. an expensive art! great!
Moreover, the lucidity of poetic expression is enticing! I strongly believe this great poem will be among top poems someday! I love your poetry!
Akhtar, my time and patience on PH is short. i simply will wish you well, and say i'm glad you are able to use PH a bit, as i am (a very little bit. i am wondering when a funeral will be held for this site. Hmm? bri : )