Tuesday, April 15, 2014

A Tear Speaks... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sorrow at times builds
an impenetrable rocky fort
around body and heart;
I grope in vain for a narrow
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indira babbellapati
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Yash Shinde 25 April 2014

Heart touching, poignant and intriguing....... a tear speaks for itself....... A sad tale, beautifully told........

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 22 April 2014

Beautifully written poem Indira, enjoyed the read. Siya_! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 April 2014

A fort turns into rubbles. Anything can happen any time. Beautifully said. Thank you.

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Shahzia Batool 15 April 2014

it touched... beyond any critical appraisal...sending it to my poem list for many merits it owns!

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Shraddha The Poetess 15 April 2014

Just fantastic mam...... Really a tear speaks.....

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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