Thursday, July 1, 2010

A Tear On My Pillow Comments

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When I lay and think, in my bed at night,
the day you'll arrive, seems nowhere in sight.
I toss and I turn, dreaming of you,
opening my eye's... checking if my dream came true.
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Sammy Peltier
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David Beckham 01 July 2010

The opening verse/paragraph is very moving. I have a loved one and one day at the store I stood there looking staring her in the face, and the mere thought of my impending trip away from her made me beak down in tears. This here is a wonderful piece of poetry, you accurately captured the true emotions associated with attachment! Great work

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