Thursday, July 23, 2009

A Tear Of Sadwater Blue Comments

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A night of wonderous gloom
The clock tick 12, a midnight noon
A girl in the room is wide awake
Gets out of bed, she trembles and shakes
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Alandra Nicole Moreira
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Clesec Swahn 06 December 2009

Beautiful poem. Simply beautiful.

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Afzal Shauq 24 July 2009

That she longs for An image of what she had, lost and regains And that image gave her the most subtle hope So slowly, as the clock struck two She fell asleep, dreaming of him Happiness in dream underneath the moon what a sweet poem with such type of above verses, , , meaningful enogh and the way you done is very interesting and soul clicking... really like your way of writing..well done dear poetry friend..liked it very much..romantic...

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She fell asleep, dreaming of him Happiness in dream underneath the moon But still from beneath her sleeping eye A tear of minded gloom A tear of sadwater blue beautiful imagination of dreaming him.. classic poem i must say.. what an urge from within...10 read mine... cry not... miss i miss...anwherey

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Alandra Nicole Moreira

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