Tuesday, December 18, 2018

A Taste Of Hell Comments

Rating: 5.0

His love came and left
Like a dust devil
Giving her nothing
But a taste of Hell.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Chinedu Dike 20 November 2024

Deep and exquisitely crafted is this concise poem of yours. Thanks for sharing it with us and do remain enriched.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 28 January 2023

Powerful expression, Rose Marie. Glad the devil has gone back to . Nice poem. Please remove my incomplete comment lines.The mobile phone keyboard is playing havoc

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Rob Lamberton 29 December 2022

Wow! Visualizing the desisted left behind! Powerful poem! !

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Anjandev Roy 30 September 2019

Like a dust devil.......fine. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Jankovic Zoran 09 April 2019

The of the wind can bring the devil dust. Dust the wind carries the way he wants it.

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Bri Edwards 21 February 2019

That's what they all say (about me) . : ( : ( i'm misunderstood! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i like the poem. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

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Bryony Sheldon 19 February 2019

There is something chilling about the last line. There is something that makes it intense- as if it were almost spitting at you from behind the screen. Perhaps it is the brevity of it- perhaps it is the truth that it speaks? Thank you for sharing.10+.

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C F 17 February 2019

Very intense short poem... very well crafted.10+ on this.

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

A taste of is beautiful sometime...however beautiful write O wise poetess.... thanks

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2019

A big 10 for this poem...

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2019

When love vanishes such feeling is obvious. A fantastic poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 January 2019

Beautiful, an example of how brevity can be beautiful.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2018

'Like a dust devil'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aqua Flower 27 December 2018

The difference between truth and deception. A very poignant write!

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Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2018

Deception in love is a taste of. A beautiful poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 December 2018

that means that was not love but a glittering //LU.ST// all that glitters is not gold!

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Kostas Lagos 24 December 2018

Love can be a cutting blade!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 December 2018

Love has magical effect in mind and life. When we keep love and beautify this, life becomes excellent heaven. Wonderful sharing is re-visited.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 December 2018

A heart touching poem. Short and to the point.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 December 2018

Love lost is very harsh on the heart. Surely, it is.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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