His love came and left
Like a dust devil
Giving her nothing
But a taste of Hell.
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Powerful expression, Rose Marie. Glad the devil has gone back to . Nice poem. Please remove my incomplete comment lines.The mobile phone keyboard is playing havoc
Wow! Visualizing the desisted left behind! Powerful poem! !
Like a dust devil.......fine. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.
The of the wind can bring the devil dust. Dust the wind carries the way he wants it.
That's what they all say (about me) . : ( : ( i'm misunderstood! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i like the poem. to MyPoemList. bri ;)
There is something chilling about the last line. There is something that makes it intense- as if it were almost spitting at you from behind the screen. Perhaps it is the brevity of it- perhaps it is the truth that it speaks? Thank you for sharing.10+.
A taste of is beautiful sometime...however beautiful write O wise poetess.... thanks
When love vanishes such feeling is obvious. A fantastic poem.
'Like a dust devil'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The difference between truth and deception. A very poignant write!
that means that was not love but a glittering //LU.ST// all that glitters is not gold!
Love has magical effect in mind and life. When we keep love and beautify this, life becomes excellent heaven. Wonderful sharing is re-visited.
Deep and exquisitely crafted is this concise poem of yours. Thanks for sharing it with us and do remain enriched.