A Taste Of Hell Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Taste Of Hell

Rating: 5.0


His love came and left
Like a dust devil
Giving her nothing
But a taste of Hell.


Copyright 2018, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

Tuesday, December 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2018

A short yet complete touching poem....10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2018

When love and comes and goes away and she feels the betray of her friend then this is painful. This gives the feeling of. A thought provoking poem is amazingly penned.10

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Bri Edwards 21 February 2019

That's what they all say (about me) . : ( : ( i'm misunderstood! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i like the poem. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

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Bryony Sheldon 19 February 2019

There is something chilling about the last line. There is something that makes it intense- as if it were almost spitting at you from behind the screen. Perhaps it is the brevity of it- perhaps it is the truth that it speaks? Thank you for sharing.10+.

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C F 17 February 2019

Very intense short poem... very well crafted.10+ on this.

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Chinedu Dike 20 November 2024

Deep and exquisitely crafted is this concise poem of yours. Thanks for sharing it with us and do remain enriched.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 28 January 2023

Powerful expression, Rose Marie. Glad the devil has gone back to . Nice poem. Please remove my incomplete comment lines.The mobile phone keyboard is playing havoc

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Rob Lamberton 29 December 2022

Wow! Visualizing the desisted left behind! Powerful poem! !

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Anjandev Roy 30 September 2019

Like a dust devil.......fine. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Jankovic Zoran 09 April 2019

The of the wind can bring the devil dust. Dust the wind carries the way he wants it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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