Never a space may foster gloom
Nor a shred of fear or doom
If its doors stay firmly shut
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This is the difficult road of love, which we travel because we sense there is mutual joy at the end of it. Bu the early stages are frustrating. But that amorous effort is more compensated by success. Your closing lines are absolutely beautiful in evoking the wionder of love achieved in mutual happiness - POEMS ERUPT FROM EYES AND LIPS / A TASTE OF HEAVEN PUR BRING SIPS.
Mundane things, simple words Fly and flit like twittering birds beautiful poem n ya mundane things have something unusual always... thank you
very clear messages in this beautiful poem. every line is lovely
you can clearly say what you realy wanted us to understand in a few words, directly, clever and its rhythm is awesome.
'Poems erupt from eyes and lips'......wow! But they erupt from hearts too!
Lovely imagery throughout the poem to create a heavenly picture of life. Enjoyed reading thoroughly.
Beautiful flowing couplets with an esoteric touch in a metaphysical stream. Lovely write.
if only that simple. Please check out my poems