A Taste Of Emptiness Comments

not only revolt to the emptiness, but a longing for reason for the emptiness, a treason to itself, a bitter taste of sugar like, ... wow very well done 10! !

Thanks for commenting on my poem, Dying. I love this poem. It's so deep and most people can relate to feeling this way some time in their lives. I can relate for sure. Great work! !

Nicely done. All emotion selected are indeed showing revolt to the emptiness.

A beauty to read..well done