Wednesday, November 8, 2017

A Taste Of Chateau Margaux Comments

Rating: 4.7

My favorite uncle is an Able Seaman
His duty is a helmsman
He comes home
Whenever his ship docks.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 12 December 2022

Fantastic representation.......thank u....dear poetess....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2022

This is really a very good poem.... well penned

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Akhtar Jawad 19 December 2018

A beautiful metaphor having lovely thoughts.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2018

He tastes everything he craves Even the most expensive wine As if he is the next one To sit on the electric chair. a wonderful attitude., today is the day of life. this present moment is the most important...... tell that i praise your uncle the sailor. thank u. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2018

This is really a sensitive poem on character dealing with your uncle who is an Able Seaman. Haunting expression. It is a great tribute to him. Beautiful poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 November 2018

Many poets when they come to read and reread poems, they always mentioned that, but I oft forgot that, but this poem, darlingly created by your sensitive golden pen, great Tribute to your favourite uncle, still very enjoyable for me, must I admit. Your uncle has an excellent taste for wines......Chateaux Margaux, true refined wine, gorgeous poem. GBU, Mrs. Juan-Austin. Amen.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 November 2018

He tastes everything he craves Even the most expensive wine As if he is the next one To sit on the electric chair.....wonderful expression! brilliantly penned!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2018

An amusing depiction on uncle's character has been amusingly and astutely delineated. I quote some lines...... He tastes everything he craves Even the most expensive wine As if he is the next one To sit on the electric chair. Beautiful poem beautifully presented.

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Robert Murray Smith 17 May 2018

The call of the sea is beautifully expressed.+++10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 May 2018

While reading the poem, your uncle comes alive for me, such an excellent description, Mrs. Juan-Austin, he has become very visual for the reader and of course he is your favourite uncle, very understandable! Such an adorable man. with a generous heart. BTW Margaux is one of my favourite wines, a tender and soft aroma. I have enjoyed very much this special poem about your favourite uncle. Myriad of 10 for the vote.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 March 2018

A beautiful character-sketch of a nice and interesting uncle.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2018

An amazing poem! The life ends tomorrow! Let's make merry today my friends and foes! What an invitation! .....He has always a bottle of wine/For friends and foes alike/Buys whatever he wants/Afraid that the world/Will end tomorrow. Rose, I vote it with 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 February 2018

A bottle of wine! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2018

Thanks Edward for the comment and visit.

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Kevin Patrick 20 November 2017

I love writers who come up with works of such vivid and realized characters, a very funny poem, his love of wine could have made him a relative of mine!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2017

You made me smile with your comments. It was very kind of you. Your nice words fuel my mind to push my pen even more. Thank you. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2017

Amazing character poem is written for favorite uncle is wise.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 November 2017

Thank you, Kumarmani. It is always a pleasure to hear nice comments from you.

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Robert 08 November 2017

A fine poem. Can you fix the words that run together? 10 Robert

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 November 2017

Thank you so much for the kind words, Robert. I don't know what to do. I know I was so meticulous in typing the poem and yet it turned out to be so bad. Right now I am in a quandary if I will just remove the poems that I submitted yesterday and today. Now, I am hesitant about what to do with my other poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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