Thursday, January 1, 2015

A Taste, A Thought From Me...To You Comments

Rating: 4.3

A bite of apple and it sweetness you have tasted
it just more than a blessing than you thought

The reality is, it is a combination of continuous blessings
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Unwritten Soul
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Mj Lemon 03 February 2018

Wonderful work, Soul. This reminds me of 'the tip of the iceberg'. It represents only a small portion of the wonder we see and experience. Too often we suppose that small, albeit important, part is the whole. How much we miss when we leap to such conclusions! A terrific poem, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2017

True message wisely portrayed with a pleasant beginning such as.... A bite of apple and it sweetness you have tasted it just more than a blessing than you thought The reality is, it is a combination of continuous blessings The blessing that you've never seen From an apple, a fruit...it came from a survival flowers that hold by a strong branch And this strength came from accumulation power produced by leaves They all hanging and stand strong by a healthy trunk and its supported roots. Though it is a poem for greeting new year 2015 yet it bears a philosophical ground on life and journey. Beautiful poem.

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Unwritten Soul 14 September 2017

Thank you Sir Kumarmani Mahakul for always support my writing, maybe my works are weak but you always find its stength thanks :)

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Rebecca Navarre 19 January 2017

Oh How Beautifully True! ! ! ! ! How Fantastic! ! ! ! ! This Just Pours Out With Strength Beauty And Love! ! ! ! ! With Such Inspiring Thoughts Shared! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much! ! ! ! ! For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many, Many10S+++++++++++++! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Muhammad Ali 12 August 2016

hello free soul this philosophical piece of art is not boring. it is very wise from you to think (to think is also a blessing) in the time which is supposed to just color the hours in various types of similar ways :) I like these thoughtful lines, plus, a free soul... I am thinking is a blessing in how many ways

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

LOVE and blessing from the heart! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Amitava Sur 25 October 2015

A thought provoking write about looking into some thing or anything with a loving spirit and with a sense of indebtedness for anything what helps you to live or enjoy. Love all, love is all, as prime mover in our mortal life

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Jinal Oswal 19 January 2015

Hi Soul, wish you Happy New Year. This is a beautiful poem and great start for the new year :)

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Neela Nath Das 14 January 2015

Happy New Year _soul.A beautiful way of greeting.You are always great!

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Neela Nath Das 14 January 2015

Happy New Year _soul.A beautiful way of greeting.You are always great!

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Lyn Paul 13 January 2015

Truly incredible words Soul. Covering simple but such important pieces of life that we should all stop, appreciate and be thankful for. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!

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Valerie Dohren 03 January 2015

Much wisdom here Soul, very well said. With very best wishes for the New Year to you also.

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