Monday, January 26, 2009

A Talk With My Father Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I could be just half
of what you dreamed I'd be
with all the rainbows at my feet
for all the world to see,
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Mari Martin
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Ravi A 01 March 2009

Always know I will remember how true your words can be. And, when life's burdens slow me down I will recall what you dreamed for me..... An excellent finish of an excellent poem.

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Great written I enjoyed reading it =D -Ash

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Great written I enjoyed reading it =D -Ash

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Sue S. 26 January 2009

That was exactly it.

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