A Tale Of Winters Dream Comments

i love how you describe the passing of time

You wrote that scene like a playwright. a playwright with exquisite poetic skills! ! ! Beautiful, graceful, elegant, full of sensitivity. 10++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list

Clear vivid image you have crafted dat evoke d imagination.brilliant poem worthy of Praise.cheers

A magnificent poem with great imagery.

Candles lithe to an enveloped glow/Defeats the shadows, with a golden echo..captivating poetic expression! I find a great poetic beauty in this elegant piece of poetry! Full marks!

The waxing span of the silver moon Calls to the breeze of the winters chill The brittle arms of the lone Birch Lay still to the frost but are not deterred.. Sweet lines

Such vivid imagery! Kevin, you transported to that place and time. And, absolutely amazingly, I was both the child, and the old man. Thoroughly enjoyed this Funtastic poem!

Beautiful rendition of words written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful creation crafted with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Kelvin and do remain enriched.

A wonderful poem brilliantly penned. Very compelling imagery. I concur with RMS 's comments.10+++

Kevin, your imagery is superb. This poem takes us through a night of winter's chill. Magnificient offering. ++++10 Popped into my favourite poems. Robert

....beautiful ink...the whole poem is picturesque with vivid images coming alive....and I especially love the title it's magical ★

A comfortable and homey atmosphere evokes the beauty of home. Well written, very vivid imagery. Makes me glad I am home for the evening and no further tasks to take me outside. Wonderful writing, good poet. Well done!

I like this. I like this very much. You caught us all up in your Winter's Night Tale! The child seeing candlelight silhouettes- - - - -]A thousand creatures, roam up the ceiling Dragons flicker avidly while unicorns preen near by - - - - - - - - ] that charmed the heck out of me! And your word choices...exquisite! - - - - - - - ]He pulls a quilt to his weary eyes Watching snowfalls gently like the eiderdown fly - - - - - - - - -] The brittle arms of the lone Birch. Very well done!

This poem is written by a very matured hand. Nicely expressed. I like it.

In this mementos note with the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Beauty spilled on the page, absolutely enjoyed reading it.

I moved with poet, wherever the poet went I was chasing him. I heard the tale, I felt the winter, though it's too hot, I became a child, I became an youth, though I am an old man. I was helpless, the poet is a magician!

This is beautiful poetry. Like to read many times.

Absolutely beautiful Kevin, certainly one of my favourites.

What a wonderful poem you offered, many many thanks for sharing! A nice tale of nice dreams with vivid imagery. 'The brittle arms of the lone Birch Lay still to the frost but are not deterred' - An incisive observation. 'The child laughs, as the old man watches The vital life of youth with imagined glasses Together they watch the stars and the snow Forever besieged in this mementos note' - You need special eyes to see all these. Enjoyed the poem, best wishes...