A Tale Of Two Burning Hearts Comments

The burning desires! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Sad and sweet pain of heart so beautifully expressed- - -Thanks for sharing.

As the still water Carries no current Though waves exist Upon its bed of slumber... So does the still time And the dead still space Between you and me, Between hearts and hearts, Between the burning desires Beautiful verse with a nice touch of eros. Thanks for this poem.

As the still air Carries no essence, Although petals emit them Off the flowers- As the still water Carries no current Though waves exist Upon its bed of slumber... So does the still time And the dead still space Beautiful lines. Love to read again and again.

Time and Space Have separated us Away from each other. As the still air Carries no essence, Although petals emit them Off the flowers- As the still water Carries no current Though waves exist Upon its bed of slumber... So does the still time And the dead still space Between you and me, Love this beautiful portion of this poem. Thanks for the lovely poem.10 out of 10. Nitu.

Between you and me, Between hearts and hearts, Between the burning desires Bluer than the Sea, Bluer than the sky, Bitterer than the torturing distance, Sweeter than the morning note, sung- In the hottest of the summer days Beautiful expression.

So does the still time And the dead still space Between you and me, Between hearts and hearts, Between the burning desires Bluer than the Sea, Bluer than the sky, Bitterer than the torturing distance, Sweeter than the morning note, sung- In the hottest of the summer days Its heart touching, a beautiful poem of timeless love. Full marks. Thank you for sharing the poem. Seema Devi.

And the dead still space Between you and me, Between hearts and hearts, Between the burning desires Bluer than the Sea, Bluer than the sky, Bitterer than the torturing distance, Sweeter than the morning note, sung- In the hottest of the summer days By the bird called Cuckoo, the ever Silence breaker and The breaker of the hearts! ! Love those beautiful lines. Thanks for sharing the poem. 10 for it.

Melancholic songs are always melodious, thanks for the share

Heart-touching poem. You have beautifully expressed the passion of lovers who are dying to be together.

beautiful verse sir....... i loved the poem.... thanks for sharing