The reticence of the night-sky
gets whispered in the depth
of the oceanic lake.
With a glimmer of expression,
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A mystic exhaltation of the 'Night' with all its romantic splendour. The imagery used conjours a sense of the elusive as well as what become alluring, about it. Seems like a mediatation upon the very feeling of what it is to be alive at night and be enraptured in it. A great piece of poetry.
awesome poem sarvesh....I really admire your thoughts....shine on....10
Thanks for your immediate response Sarvesh...you have already read...your poem is at par...in its depth its wit and wisdom alike Kesav
A tale of centuries looms large in the grandeur of the infiite ambience. Rachel Ann Butler
Yes; the hopeful moonlight miss out the sublime sun...creative work, Sarvesh...excellent imageries...and a truth behind...10 Read my piece- Of A Hideout Mysterious...if you haven't so far
hmmmmmmmmmmmm this is what i felt after reading your poem.it is so pleasent.
And thus wakes up the morn, missing the delight that almost never was! ...you are a wise soul. dear young man!
Beautiful. I was swept away by the elegance of this write and the beauty of its imagery. A perfect 10 from me.