Friday, October 9, 2009

...A Tale Of The Night. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The reticence of the night-sky
gets whispered in the depth
of the oceanic lake.
With a glimmer of expression,
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Anand Madhukar 20 October 2009

Beautiful. I was swept away by the elegance of this write and the beauty of its imagery. A perfect 10 from me.

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Dilshan Boange 19 October 2009

A mystic exhaltation of the 'Night' with all its romantic splendour. The imagery used conjours a sense of the elusive as well as what become alluring, about it. Seems like a mediatation upon the very feeling of what it is to be alive at night and be enraptured in it. A great piece of poetry.

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Vaibhav Pandey 11 October 2009

awesome poem sarvesh....I really admire your thoughts....shine on....10

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Kesav Easwaran 10 October 2009

Thanks for your immediate response Sarvesh...you have already read...your poem is at par...in its depth its wit and wisdom alike Kesav

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

A tale of centuries looms large in the grandeur of the infiite ambience. Rachel Ann Butler

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Kesav Easwaran 09 October 2009

Yes; the hopeful moonlight miss out the sublime sun...creative work, Sarvesh...excellent imageries...and a truth behind...10 Read my piece- Of A Hideout Mysterious...if you haven't so far

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Maitreyee Joshi 09 October 2009

hmmmmmmmmmmmm this is what i felt after reading your poem.it is so pleasent.

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Indira Babbellapati 09 October 2009

And thus wakes up the morn, missing the delight that almost never was! ...you are a wise soul. dear young man!

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