A Tale Of Sunken Silence Comments

you always pen in softness and lovely images..a tale of your ink and leaf is great!

This is a excellent write.Love it

This is a excellent write.Love it

The poem is not bad at all

a beautiful poem about people who live simple life with great dreams, fine rhyming and excellent flow.

dear Ravi this is so very nice poem with a speciall rythm luwi

A sunken silence for a sunken heart. You have told a heart wrenching story of a woman's sorrow and a beautiful and empathetic way. 10 love Karin

A very beautiful and poignant wite Ravi 10 Daniel Thank you

beautiful and touching poem. you have penchat for writing on underdogs. very good idea.such poems will work wonders some day.thanx for sharing voted10 surya

a very powerful and beautiful write. this one touches the inner soul. gr8t a ten

lovely sir...the story and nature go hand in hand...very touching and poetic write

pains? ....this is nice.. how can i put my words to fit my admiration in this poem? how can i tell you that i like this very much? .. how can i say my appreciation in a nice way? .. i will rather say it this way....ur a wonderful man dear..

A poem full of pure poetry.

Good write......................................

wonderful......... in every way.

so beautiful the poem itself sings 10

Beautiful poetry Ravi...well written piece...10

This is, to me very moving Ravi - - the pathos, the unbelievable existence of the mother and son and the imagery used to support this in the piece is of the topmost quality..10 + ++ Fay

A touching story and a big loss for the mother...only mothers can feel her pain..A silenced heart while one is alive is worse than death...