Monday, February 23, 2009

A Tale Of Osaka Comments

Rating: 5.0

(dedicated to L'arc en ciel, a great rock band from Japan)

ashita e mirai e
hito kakera no ai wo
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COMMENTS
Noel Horlanda 24 September 2009

i didn't know you could write Nihongin and French, you're no.! my friend. Great lingo! You're also a brilliant tourist guide, well informed of the Nihongin environment or I should say an environmentalist too. A great great Nihongin band, one of these days I'd like to hear their music. Cheers!

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 10 March 2009

Fantastic write! You are a real great poet!

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Little Morning Star 06 March 2009

I know this band, my boy does like it and it must be a great band for you and him.. a great poem..

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Stacey Watts 02 March 2009

Wonderfully written and I could not read some of the languages either. It looks good to me though.

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Raja Basu 01 March 2009

I love the deep rooted emotion displayed by you.

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Cheung Shun Sang 27 February 2009

Your poem had very beauty surroindings. Scene make all to surrender

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Wow The words are so different it was hard for me to read but it flowed greatly.. Krista

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Sandra Martyres 25 February 2009

Unusual and very colourful in terms of the languages used and imagery...

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premji premji 25 February 2009

beautiful....................................

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Indira Babbellapati 25 February 2009

hey, u can be a cultural ambassodor par excellence cutting across all artificial boundaries!

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Lalitha iyer 24 February 2009

Oh dear, what is the language intermittently coming between English lines........it sounds very musical and very very much like Bengali..........you are writing in volumes where as I am a dog and can only lick a few drops.

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Juan Carlos Abeti 24 February 2009

LIKE THE WAY YOU DID IT....

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Juan Carlos Abeti 24 February 2009

LIKE THE WAY YOU DID IT....

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Mimi Fakhira 24 February 2009

Love the descriptions! Arigato gozaimas! (is that the correct spelling? Hope it is..) I can feel the sakuras falling weightlessly on my shoulders.. oh, it's my mother's hands. Wonderful poem and keep up the style!

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Sebastine Humaemo 24 February 2009

perfect tribute for the band....well writtn........loved the way, lines goes on...sebastine

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Ency Bearis 24 February 2009

a nice imagery write as you brought the reader to Osaka..

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Subbaraman N V 24 February 2009

Thanks in tons for having carried me to Osaka! I recollect my 'In flight of imagination' in the PH.

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Louis Rams 23 February 2009

i compliment you as a bilinguist, and being able to translate meanings so beautifully

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Seema Aarella 23 February 2009

As i read through....the images of places and people appear before my eyes...thanks for this descriptive write, which introduced me to the unseen and unknown....! ! ! ! !

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Jim Norausky 23 February 2009

Ahmad, You could be ambassador to Osaka with a key to the city. Enjoyable poem. Jim

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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